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Friendship is very important part of our life. Basically, it is that because we are social animal. But what\'re the special points of the \'friends\' which distinguish it with other kinds of personal relationship? I think, \'eternality\' is that. Somebody can say friendship is not permanent. But I don\'t think so. Of course, most of the friendships have a short life. However, if you pass the certain period, you might earn the nearly permanent relationship. It is quite different with the boyfriend. Friendship is more stable than romantic relationship because we don\'t have to obsession with the friend. We can allow the differences much easily each other. (under the presumption that you already done the middle school like values about the friendship) And, we can learn about the way to understand various types of people. Even if you are likely to making friends who have similar values with you, the circumstance around them will change. Eventually, you can get new types of people through them.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your thoughts about the homework question I sent last time. ^^
I hope that the friendship you established with others, will last for a long time.
Always take care and see you tomorrow.
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
Basically, it is that because we are social animal.
>> Basically, it is because we are social animals.
But what\'re the special points of the \'friends\' which distinguish it with other kinds of personal relationship? I think, \'eternality\' is that.
>> But what are the special points of the \'friends\' which distinguish it with other kinds of personal relationships? I think, it is \'eternality\'.
Somebody can say friendship is not permanent. But I don\'t think so.
>> CORRECT.
Of course, most of the friendships have a short life.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Of course, most friendships have a short span of life.
However, if you pass the certain period, you might earn the nearly permanent relationship.
>> CORRECT.
It is quite different with the boyfriend.
>> It is quite different from having a boyfriend.
Friendship is more stable than romantic relationship because we don\'t have to obsession with the friend.
>> Friendship is more stable than romantic relationship because we don\'t have the obsession towards a friend.
We can allow the differences much easily each other. (under the presumption that you already done the middle school like values about the friendship)
>> We can easily understand the differences of each other. (under the presumption that you\'re already done learning it in middle school- like values about friendship)
And, we can learn about the way to understand various types of people.
>> CORRECT.
Even if you are likely to making friends who have similar values with you, the circumstance around them will change. Eventually, you can get new types of people through them.
>> CORRECT.
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