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2019-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Frankly, I seldom get the stress. Because I always try not to concern about situation which I can\'t change. I think mosts of the circumstances which bring us the stress are quite wasteful. For example, worrying about the result of the test that I\'m already done or personality of the group member for the group project. These kinds of situations are very common cause of the stress, but you can find the fact that worrying about that is useles, if you think about it a while. What I want to say is, we can prevent most of the stresess easily! But, it\'s natural to worry about the situation that you face since we\'re human. I usually release the stress by talking about the situation to my friends if I failed to switch off. But I don\'t think it is fundamental solution. And sometimes mentioning the situation that I face makes me more painful. By saying about it , I fall into the way of reminding my situation. So, quitely praying for god and putting down the concerns are the best for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your opinion about the homework question I gave.
I really appreciate it.
I hope that you will continue to relieve the stress you are facing each day.
Always be healthy. ^^
See you in class! 

~Teacher Gina



Frankly, I seldom get the stress. Because I always try not to concern about situation which I can\'t change. 
>> Frankly, I seldom get stressed because I always try not to concern myself about situations which I can\'t change.
I think mosts of the circumstances which bring us the stress are quite wasteful.
>> I think most of the circumstances which bring us the stress are quite wasteful.
>> Or: I think most of the circumstances which bring us stress are nonsensical.
For example, worrying about the result of the test that I\'m already done or personality of the group member for the group project.
>> For example, worrying about the result of the test which I\'m already done with or the personality of a group member for the group project.
 These kinds of situations are very common cause of the stress, but you can find the fact that worrying about that is useless, if you think about it a while.
>> These kinds of situations are very common cause of the stress, but you can find the fact that worrying about that is useless, if you think about it for awhile.
 What I want to say is, we can prevent most of the stresses easily!
>> CORRECT.
 But, it\'s natural to worry about the situation that you face since we\'re human. I usually release the stress by talking about the situation to my friends if I failed to switch off.
>> CORRECT.
 But I don\'t think it is fundamental solution.
>> But I don\'t think it is the fundamental solution.
 And sometimes mentioning the situation that I face makes me more painful.
>> And sometimes, mentioning the situation that I face makes me feel more pain.
>> Or: And sometimes, mentioning the situation that I face makes it more painful.
 By saying about it , I fall into the way of reminding my situation.
>> CORRECT.
So, quitely praying for god and putting down the concerns are the best for me.
>> So, quietly praying to God and putting down the concerns I have are the best ways for me.

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