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Obeying the rules is important whether the rule is right or not.
Typically, there are appropriate reasons in making the rules. For example, in the university, there is grading policy. If many of the professors are not obey the rules, many problems will be occured like complaints of students and falling confidence of the school so on. That is if violating the rules is repeated, confusions and inconveniences will be arised. Since in numerous case, rules are formulated to protect and teach every group member.
Even, the rules are not righteous, we need to follow them. Of course, wrong rules should be modified. But that procedure is also processed within the rules. If violating the \'wrong\' rules is permitted, much more people are likely to abuse it. some people who violate the rules might say \'the problem is the rule, not me\' even in the situation the rule is not that wrong. Therefore, the right to criticize the rules only should be permitted to people who don\'t break the rules.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework.
I really appreciate your opinion about rules.
I totally agree with you. Obeying rules is very important especially in this world where we live in.
Have a wonderful day and see you in class tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
Typically, there are appropriate reasons in making the rules. For example, in the university, there is grading policy.
Typically, there are appropriate reasons in making the rules. For example, in the university, there is grading policy.
>> Typically, there are appropriate reasons in making the rules. For example, in the university. there is a grading policy.
If many of the professors are not obey the rules, many problems will be occured like complaints of students and falling confidence of the school so on.
>> If many of the professors do not obey the rules, many problems will occur like complaints from students and losing the confidence to school.
That is if violating the rules is repeated, confusions and inconveniences will be arised.
>> That is if violating the rules is repeated, confusions and inconveniences will be arising.
Since in numerous case, rules are formulated to protect and teach every group member.
>> Since in numerous cases, rules were formulated to protect and teach every group member.
Even, the rules are not righteous, we need to follow them.
Even, the rules are not righteous, we need to follow them.
>> Even if the rules are not righteous, we need to follow them.
Of course, wrong rules should be modified. But that procedure is also processed within the rules. If violating the \'wrong\' rules is permitted, much more people are likely to abuse it. some people who violate the rules might say \'the problem is the rule, not me\' even in the situation the rule is not that wrong. Therefore, the right to criticize the rules only should be permitted to people who don\'t break the rules.
>> CORRECT.
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