영어첨삭교정
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No, I don\'t agree with this opinion. I think clothes is just clothes, because I have no experience that dress changes my feeling. Also, I\'ve never talked about this kinds of experience. Of course, there are some proverbs and episodes of someone I don\'t know. But, at least for me, dress can\'t affects my feeling. If there\'s case corresponding to this, it would be circumstance that I feel happy because I am wearing a new clothes. But, I think, this case is out of the discussion: since it is not due to the kind of the clothes.
Usually for me, clothes is somewhat irritating thing. It is so hard to chose clothes which is proper to the situation and also comfortable. Frankly speaking, in this reason, I have been becoming more and more insincere to choosing the clothes. So now, junior in college, I seldom wear skirts or something pretty clothes. Even sometimes I go to the school putting on the slippers. But, fortunately I might have remaining minds to dressing more carefully.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Good afternoon! ^^
Thank you for submitting your opinion about the question I sent last time.
To be honest, I also feel the same way.
I think, just making sure that I wear comfortable clothes makes me happy. ^^
Anyway, see you later in class.
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
I think clothes is just clothes, because I have no experience that dress changes my feeling.
>> I think clothes are just clothes because I have no experience when a certain dress changed my feelings.
Also, I\'ve never talked about this kinds of experience. Of course, there are some proverbs and episodes of someone I don\'t know.
>> CORRECT.
But, at least for me, dress can\'t affects my feeling.
>> But at least for me, dress can\'t affect my feeling.
If there\'s case corresponding to this, it would be circumstance that I feel happy because I am wearing a new clothes.
>> If there\'s a case corresponding to this, it would be a circumstance that I feel happy because I am wearing new clothes.
But, I think, this case is out of the discussion: since it is not due to the kind of the clothes.
>> CORRECT.
Usually for me, clothes is somewhat irritating thing.
>> Usually for me, clothes are somewhat irritating things.
It is so hard to chose clothes which is proper to the situation and also comfortable.
>> It is so hard to choose clothes which are proper to the situation and also comfortable.
>> Or: It is so hard to choose clothes that are appropriate to the situation and also comfortable.
Frankly speaking, in this reason, I have been becoming more and more insincere to choosing the clothes.
>> CORRECT.
So now, junior in college, I seldom wear skirts or something pretty clothes.
>> So now that I am in junior college, I seldom wear skirts or clothes that are somewhat pretty.
Even sometimes I go to the school putting on the slippers.
>> CORRECT.
But, fortunately I might have remaining minds to dressing more carefully.
>> But fortunately, I might have some awareness left in dressing more carefully.
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