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I think talking about the national level laws is too much for me.. One of my convictions that I got from my major study is \'There\'s no absolutely right law in human society.\' That is, most important thing depends on the society\'s social context. Even I explained very vervosely , what I want to say is simple: I can\'t figure out anything about national or internationa level law. But about more casual range, I have something to talk about. It\'s about my school -or national- level conventions. That is grading the participation rates. For example, the case of one of my professor. He got in trouble in every class because he was counting each student\'s participations and reflecting it to the grade. The problem was, every student prepared very enthusiastically just to \'get the grade\'. It makes not only professor to difficult - picking who - , also sometimes the lecture\'s direction wrongly. So, I want that every professor lets the students to participate freely, not mandatorily.

I think talking about the national level laws is too much for me.. One of my convictions that I got from my major study is \'There\'s no absolutely right law in human society.\' That is, most important thing depends on the society\'s social context. Even I explained very vervosely , what I want to say is simple: I can\'t figure out anything about national or internationa level law. 
But about more casual range, I have something to talk about. It\'s about my school -or national- level conventions. That is grading the participation rates. For example, the case of one of my professor. He got in trouble in every class because he was counting each student\'s participations and reflecting it to the grade. The problem was, every student prepared very enthusiastically just to \'get the grade\'. It makes not only professor to difficult - picking who - , also sometimes the lecture\'s direction wrongly. So, I want that every professor lets the students to participate freely, not mandatorily.