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If my satisfying job is very poor, I\'ll choose well-paid job. Generally, poor but satisfying jobs are likely to be artistic job. Success in that area is very hard unless he is an genius. So if my future dream is an artist, I would gave up that dream. I think , what I love to do is better to remain as a hobby. Because when it beomes to the \'job\', I might be get some stress due to that. If that job is hard to success, more it is. Moreover, If one person have a lot of money, she can do almost whatever whe wants (only if job job is satisfying enough work-life balance.) So if I love art, I rather do that as just an hobby. Of course, this is just my private opinion and people who struggle to success her own fields are always beautiful. Unlike the foregoing, my future dream is a satisfying job. But my future dream is also a well-paid job. Also I love politics, but don\'t feel relax studying that. Rather, it arouses me a sense of challenge. In these points, my dream is different with above.

If my satisfying job is very poor, I\'ll choose well-paid job. Generally, poor but satisfying jobs are likely to be artistic job. Success in that area is very hard unless he is an genius. So if my future dream is an artist, I would gave up that dream. I think , what I love to do is better to remain as a hobby. Because when it beomes to the \'job\', I might be get some stress due to that. If that job is hard to success, more it is. Moreover, If one person have a lot of money, she can do almost whatever whe wants (only if job job is satisfying enough work-life balance.) So if I love art, I rather do that as just an hobby. Of course, this is just my private opinion and people who struggle to success her own fields are always beautiful. Unlike the foregoing, my future dream is a satisfying job. But my future dream is also a well-paid job. Also I love politics, but don\'t feel relax studying that. Rather, it arouses me a sense of challenge. In these points, my dream is different with above.