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It is related with my major and future dream. My first major, politics, is a very beneficial field for students who fluent in English. When I was a freshman, I intentionally avoid activities which English ability is needed. But through the school life, I realize the fact that if I always avoide the English, I will miss the many good opportunities after all. So I decided to study English eventhough it seems that development is too slow than I hope.
Actually, exchange student program is also in line with this challenge. I know that most of students who apply the exchange program not aim the English. But thought that I can improve my English skills by preparing the exchange program, and I think that was right decision now. Going to the exchange program is good motivation for English study to me.
Also, English skill is necessary for my future dream, scholar. Because to become an professor in Korea, studying in U.S.A. is virtually essential.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Like what most people say, everything is possible as log as you make an effort for it. It could be difficult, but it is possible. It\'s good to have a dream/goal. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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It is related with my major and future dream. >>> correct
>>> OR: It is related to my major and future dream.
My first major, politics, is a very beneficial field for students who fluent in English.
>>> My first major, Politics, is quite a beneficial field for students who are fluent in English.
When I was a freshman, I intentionally avoid activities which English ability is needed.
>>> When I was a freshman, I intentionally avoided activities where English ability is needed.
But through the school life, I realize the fact that if I always avoide the English, I will miss the many good opportunities after all.
>>> But throughout the school life, I realized the fact that if I always avoided English, I will miss out on many good opportunities after all.
So I decided to study English eventhough it seems that development is too slow than I hope.
>>> So I decided to study English even though it seems that development is much slower than what I was hoping for.
Actually, exchange student program is also in line with this challenge.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Actually, being in an exchange student program is also in line with this challenge.
I know that most of students who apply the exchange program not aim the English.
>>> I know that most of students who apply for the exchange program are not aiming for English fluency.
But thought that I can improve my English skills by preparing the exchange program, and I think that was right decision now.
>>> But I thought that I can improve my English skills by preparing for the exchange program, and I think that was a right decision now.
Going to the exchange program is good motivation for English study to me.
>>> OR: Going to the exchange program is a good motivation to study English for me.
Also, English skill is necessary for my future dream, scholar.
>>> Also, English skill is necessary for my future dream, being a scholar.
Because to become an professor in Korea, studying in U.S.A. is virtually essential.
>>> Because to become a professor in Korea, studying in the U.S.A. is virtually essential.
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