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I\'m not sure I understand this question well, I usually make appointments through the kakao talk and some applications.
Of course sometimes I make appointments face to face, but it is rare situation.
In case of very close friends, one of them start the chatting with \'let\'s go travel this summer vacation\'. Then every member of that chatting room talks about their fixed schedule like academic schedule and part time job so on. After excluding all the dates, we adjust the precise date and time according to each friend\'s preferences.
In case of just acquaitance, I also usually use kakaotalk. For example,there is a 밥약 which means lunch or dinner appointment between colleges or junior-senior. When I get the kakao talk message from someone in my school, we share each other\'s timetable and screenshot of calender application that shows my monthly schedule. By sharin this, I can make appointments more easily.
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. I appreciate it. You got the question right. It\'s basically asking the process of how you make appointments with other people. Very well said.
- T. Beth
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I\'m not sure I understand this question well, I usually make appointments through the kakao talk and some applications.>>> correct.
Of course sometimes I make appointments face to face, but it is rare situation.
Of course sometimes I make appointments face to face, but it is rare situation.
>>> Of course, sometimes I make appointments face to face, but it is a rare situation.
>>> OR: Of course, sometimes I make appointments face to face, but it is a rare case.
In case of very close friends, one of them start the chatting with \'let\'s go travel this summer vacation\'.
>>> OR: In case of very close friends, one of them starts the chat with \'let\'s go travel this summer vacation\'.
>>> OR: In case of very close friends, one of them starts chatting with \'let\'s go travel this summer vacation\'.
Then every member of that chatting room talks about their fixed schedule like academic schedule and part time job so on.
>>> Then every member of that chatting room talks about his/her fixed schedule like academic schedule, part time job and so on.
After excluding all the dates, we adjust the precise date and time according to each friend\'s preferences.
>>> correct
In case of just acquaitance, I also usually use kakaotalk.
In case of just acquaitance, I also usually use kakaotalk.
>>> correct.
For example,there is a 밥약 which means lunch or dinner appointment between colleges or junior-senior.
>>> correct.
When I get the kakao talk message from someone in my school, we share each other\'s timetable and screenshot of calender application that shows my monthly schedule.
>>> When I get the kakao talk message from someone in my school, we share each other\'s timetable and screenshot of calendar application that shows our monthly schedule.
By sharin this, I can make appointments more easily.
>>> By sharing this, I can make appointments more easily.
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