correction from yesterday
학생이 쓴 원문
How have you been?  It was lazy days? When was the last time we talk together?
After I finished that project, I couldn’t do anything, except playing game and lay down. That was me during last 7days after interview.
Rest a year and half, 6 months I spent for covering,
Take care of my business also.
Even I couldn’t ask for which answer is the right one for her question.
Because you were so nervous, it was very hard to compose yourself well.
Two governments hold different view what was the starting point of the regional war near the boarder.
North Korea asserted they were attacked first, so the action was to defense themselves from threatening of South Korea.
강사 첨삭
Ashton,
I am so happy to hear a composition from you today. This is part of the plan B, right? Nonetheless, I am satisfied with it. Keep writing! I know you’ll get the hang of it...
I hope you find these corrections helpful.
- Jenny -
How have you been?
>>Correct.
<I’ve been well, thanks!>
It was lazy days?
>> I am lazy these days.
>>I was lazy in the past few days.
When was the last time we talk together?
>> When was the last time we talked.
>>When was the last time we had a conversation?
After I finished that project, I couldn’t do anything, except playing game and lay down.
>>After I finished the project, I didn't do anything except playing games and laying down.
That was me during last 7days after interview.
>>Correct.
>>That was me in the past 7 days after the interview.
Rest a year and half, 6 months I spent for covering,
>> I took a rest for a year and a half. I spent the remaining 6 months for recovering.
Take care of my business also.
>>I took care of my business also.
Even I couldn’t ask for which answer is the right one for her question.
>> Even I couldn't think of the right answer to her question.
Because you were so nervous, it was very hard to compose yourself well.
>>Correct.
Two governments hold different view what was the starting point of the regional war near the boarder.
>>The two governments hold a different view of what was the starting point of the regional war near the boarder.
North Korea asserted they were attacked first, so the action was to defense themselves from threatening of South Korea.
>> North Korea asserted they were attacked first, so the action was to defend themselves from the threats of South Korea.
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