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Teacher Nina

If I work in the aa University, I want to research like to have these categroies.

>> If I will work at ____ University, I want to research about these categories:

>> OR: If I will be working at ____ University, I want to research something from these categories:
aa, bb and cc.

And These are a list of subject I can lecture.

>> These are the list of the subjects that I can teach.
>> OR; These are the list of subjects that I can share my knowledge to my students.
Control and robot related subject is related with my major. 

>> Control and robot related subjects are related to my major.
And I have experience to lecture about Mechanics of materiel and mathematics at the korea military academy.

>> And I have an experience to give a lecture about Mechanics of material and Mathematics in the Korean military academy/

So I can leture these subjects. 

>> So I can give a lecture about it.

If I be a member of Department of kk at the aa univ, I’ll do my best for the development of the department and the university,

>> If I will be a member of the Department of _____ at ____ University, I will do my best to make the department and university a better one.
>> OR; If I will be a member of the Department of _____ at ____ University, I will do my best to share something that will make it a competitive one.

These mechanical wave transmission from the smartwatch can be applicable to the door knob for transmitting authentication data, or name card transmission during the handshake or secure data transmission from watch to another device without using wireless electronics.  

>> This mechanical wave transmission from the smartwatch can be applied to the door knob to transmit authenticated data, or name card transmission during the handshake or secure data transmission from watch to another device without using wireless electronics.