Correction please
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Hi Andrea,
I hope you are having a nice week.
Can you correct me the below writing is good or not? Thank you.
2) And here is another picture from 50 ea of 30cc shipped this Tuesday. I have attached some more pictures showing the inconsistency of bone tissue.About 25% among 50ea of 30cc looks have mixed crushed ones comparing to normal ones.
Our customer asked if 30cc bone chips usually send out at this kind of proportion with mixed crushed ones.
Please advise.
Thank you.
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Hi Miss. [Name],
Here\'s the second correction.
~~T. Andrea
2) And here is another picture from 50 ea of 30cc shipped this Tuesday.
>> Here is another picture from 50 ea of 30cc shipped this Tuesday.
I have attached some more pictures showing the inconsistency of bone tissue.
>> Correct
About 25% among 50ea of 30cc looks have mixed crushed ones comparing to normal ones.
>> About 25% among the 50ea of 30 cc seems to have mixed crushed ones comparing to normal ones.
>> About 25% among the 50ea of 30 cc seems to have mixed crushed ones comparing to normal ones.
Our customer asked if 30cc bone chips usually send out at this kind of proportion with mixed crushed ones.
>> Correct
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