Cosmetic Surgery
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Theme: [ESSAY] Do you think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks?
I think some people should have to take the surgery.
Because there are some people that the outside is ugly but the inside, he(she) have a loving heart.
So when that kind of people take the surgery, they became the person that the outside is beautiful and the inside is beautiful too!
I think some people should have to take the surgery.
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Theme: [ESSAY] Do you think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks?
I think some people should have to take the surgery. Because there are some people that the outside is ugly but the inside, he(she) have a loving heart.
>> I think some people need to have surgery because there are those that are beautiful inside but ugly outside.
So when that kind of people take the surgery, they became the person that the outside is beautiful and the inside is beautiful too!
>> So when that kind of people undergo surgery, their beauty inside would be reflected outside, which means that their inner and outer beauty would match.
I think some people should have to take the surgery.
>> So I believe some people should have cosmetic surgery.
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