Cosmetic surgery sounds scary to me.

2018-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I don't like a surgery. It accompany with mcuh pain. Are you in a good mood? or in a bad mood? When you are sick teacher Grey did good to me. I hope I will learn a lot from here as same as the old days. Thanks.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

Talk to you later ☺


I don\'t like a surgery.
>> I don\'t like the idea of cosmetic surgery.


It accompany with mcuh pain.
>> It is accompanied with much pain. 


Are you in a good mood? or in a bad mood?
>> Are you in a good mood or in a bad mood? 


When you are sick teacher Grey did good to me.
>> When you were sick, teacher Gray taught me. 


I hope I will learn a lot from here as same as the old days.
>> I hope I will learn a lot from here just like the old days.  


Thanks.

>> CORRECT

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