Costmetics

When I was just a freshman, I started to make up my face at the first. At that time, I thought that I would be pretty if i applied a lot of cosmetics. Therfore, I put them on my face again and again. I used all kinds of cosmetics such as lipstick, eyeliner, mascara, foundation, blusher, etc.. I could not understand why I didn't look prettier then before when I made up my face . My mother and friends always said that I looked better when I didn't make up. However, I can find out the way of make-up nowadays. I don't use cosmetics ecessively anymore. I use them as less as possible in order to conceal my flaws. I feel ashamed when I recall the time when I was a freshman.

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