Could cloning people lead to problems? What kinds of problems?

2016-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Cloning is the production of genetically identical organisms via somatic cell nuclear transfer. In other words, cloning is the method of producing a baby that has the same genes as its parent. The ethics of human cloning has become a great issue in the past few years and there are also other concerns. There is a possibility of compromising individualities because they will look alike. The loss of genetic variation is another valid reason that is claimed by opponents of human cloning. A “black market” of fetuses may arise from desirable donors that will want to be able to clone themselves, i.e., movie stars, athletes, and others. Technology is not well developed yet. It has a low fertility rate. In cloning Dolly, 277 eggs were used, 30 started to divide, nine induced pregnancy, and only one survived to term. It means that 276 lives have been disposed. Clones may be treated as second-class citizens. There are unknown psychosocial harms with impact on the family and society as well

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

Good afternoon.
How are you?
How was your holiday?

I hope you had a wonderful time.

I appreciate that you shared a lot of ideas about cloning.

Thank you!

There was a time that I wished that I have a twin.

But I changed my mind, it is better to be unique.

We can talk more about this in class.

Teacher Nina


Cloning is the production of genetically identical organisms via somatic cell nuclear transfer.

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In other words, cloning is the method of producing a baby that has the same genes as its parent.

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The ethics of human cloning has become a great issue in the past few years and there are also other concerns.

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There is a possibility of compromising individualities because they will look alike.

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The loss of genetic variation is another valid reason that is claimed by opponents of human cloning.

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A “black market” of fetuses may arise from desirable donors that will want to be able to clone themselves, i.e., movie stars, athletes, and others.

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Technology is not well developed yet. 

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It has a low fertility rate. 

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In cloning Dolly, 277 eggs were used, 30 started to divide, nine induced pregnancy, and only one survived to term.

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It means that 276 lives have been disposed.

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Clones may be treated as second-class citizens.

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There are unknown psychosocial harms with impact on the family and society as well

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