Could hot soup cool you down to beat the summer heat?

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You sure are fond to this tradition in your country. There are different ways to cool down ourselves like eating shaved ice with some fruit toppings. I personally love, and crave for it. Eating dog meat in my country is prohibited by the law, so it\'s illegal because we do believe that animals should also be protected. A great opinion over the matter! See you!

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Drinking hot food in warm weather may not make sense, but it is common for Koreans to line up for a steaming bowl of chicken. 

>>> Eating hot food in a warm weather may not make sense, but it is common for Koreans to line up for a steaming bowl of chicken.  

Koreans believe that hot food can cool us down to beat the summer heat.

>>> Correct!

In this reason, we always go to the restaurant which sell chicken soup or dog meat when the summer start. 

>>> In this reason, we always go to the restaurant which sells chicken soup or dog\'s meat when the summer starts.  

It is known as a food that can boost one\'s physical condition.
>>> Correct!

>>> OR: It is a well-known food that can boost one\'s physical condition.

And dog meat is rumored to be good for male virility which may explain why more men take a dog meat than women do.

>>> Dog meat is rumored to be good for male virility which may explain why more men are eating a dog meat than women do.

>>> Dog meat is rumored to be a good aphrodisiac which explains why men are more fond with it than women.

However, many people have a dog or cat as a pet these day, so they are trying to save animals from the country, especially dogs.
>>> However, many people have a dog or a cat as pets these days, so they are trying to save animals in their country, especially dogs.  

I could understand why they don\'t want to kill dogs, but it has been a kind of culture in Korea and it is the one\'s right to eat something.

>>> I could understand why they don\'t want to kill dogs, but it has been a kind of culture in Korea, and it is the one\'s right to eat anything.

If somebody would like to eat it, I think that we have to allow them to eat it.

>>> If somebody would like to eat dog meat, I think that we have to allow them.

>> OR: I think we should allow people to eat dog meat if they want to.