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1.It's good to throw out your bigotry about him. 2.Don't too complicatedly think. Life is just a bowl of cherries. 3.I reserved the ticket at 11 o'clock. 4.I'm going out of my house at 10 o'clock at latest. 5.I'm having a job interview as soon as I arrive in Seoul. 6.I'm sorry to leave Daegu, and my mom is really sorry about that. 7.I might cry. 8.I packed my luggage to leave for Seoul. 9.Of course I remember that. 10.I seemed to get little stress. 11.At that time the education zeal of parents was not severe as now, if my memory serves me. 12.Korean students seem to grow up dreaming of only entering a good university throughout their school years. 13.That can be, but it seems to be rare in my thoughts. 14.Yes, it became a typical course to take natually. 15.Competition for a good university will get more severe. And it will be difficult for students to find out their real dream, real hope more than ever. 16.Entering a good university is a crucial matter.

Hi Ms. [이름]! Please review my corrections below. Have a great evening and enjoy the weekend! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.It\'s good to throw out your bigotry about him. >> It\'s good to get rid of your bigotry towards him.2.Don\'t too complicatedly think. Life is just a bowl of cherries. >> Don\'t think in a complicated way. Life is just a bowl of cherries. OR >> Don\'t think too hard. Life is just a bowl of cherries.3.I reserved the ticket at 11 o\'clock. >> CORRECT4.I\'m going out of my house at 10 o\'clock at latest. >> I\'m going out of my house at 10 o\'clock sharp.5.I\'m having a job interview as soon as I arrive in Seoul. >> CORRECT6.I\'m sorry to leave Daegu, and my mom is really sorry about that. >> I feel sorry about leaving Daegu. My mom feels the same way too.7.I might cry. >> CORRECT8.I packed my luggage to leave for Seoul. >> CORRECT9.Of course I remember that.>> CORRECT 10.I seemed to get little stress.>> It seems like I\'m a little stressed. 11.At that time the education zeal of parents was not severe as now, if my memory serves me.>> If my memory serves me right, the zeal of parents in education back then was not as severe as right now. 12.Korean students seem to grow up dreaming of only entering a good university throughout their school year.>> CORRECT OR >> Korean students seem to dream about entering a good university all throughout their school year. 13.That can be, but it seems to be rare in my thoughts.>> That must be the case, but it didn\'t cross my mind that much. 14.Yes, it became a typical course to take natually.>> Yes, it became the most typical course to take up. OR >> Yes, it was the course that I would naturally take up. 15.Competition for a good university will get more severe. And it will be difficult for students to find out their real dreams, real hopes more than ever.>> CORRECT OR >> The competition to enter a good university will get more serious. It will be difficult for students to find out their real dreams and hopes, now more than ever. - better 16.Entering a good university is a crucial matter. >> CORRECT