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1.The TV sound heard in the nest door hinders me from studying English. 2.I encountered the rival whom I had been avoiding. 3.That's too simplistic thoughts. 4.Your joke is a really old chestnut. 5.I'm unearthing the treasure that my teacher hid under the tree. 6.You seem like carrot top at a distance. 7.Did you move in Seoul? 8.I moved to the new apartment in Seoul. 9.I moved in to my new apartment the day before yesterday. 10.Because the surrounding of my house is a little dark and scary. 11.Why did you postpone the class? 12.My notebook in Seoul wasn't working and I couldn't see the text book. 13.So I couldn't take the class. 14.How do you feel after moving on? 15.I'm still afraid and nervous. But I'll get better. 16.It's colder in Seoul than Daegu. 17.He did never lose his sedate attitude. 18.I don't want to eat such cheesy food. 19.After being scolded from me, my puppy was squating down on the sofa.

Hi Ms. [이름]! Great job in this composition! ^^ Please review my corrections below. Have a great evening and enjoy the weekend! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.The TV sound heard in the nest door hinders me from studying English. >> The loud sound of TV from next door hinders me in studying English.2.I encountered the rival whom I had been avoiding. >> CORRECT3.That\'s too simplistic thoughts.>> CORRECT OR >> Those thoughts are too simplistic. 4.Your joke is a really old chestnut.>> Your joke is an old chestnut. 5.I\'m unearthing the treasure that my teacher hid under the tree.>> CORRECT 6.You seem like carrot top at a distance.>> You seem like a carrot top from a distance. 7.Did you move in Seoul?>> Did you move to Seoul? 8.I moved to the new apartment in Seoul.>> CORRECT 9.I moved in to my new apartment the day before yesterday.>> CORRECT 10.Because the surroundings of my house is a little dark and scary.>> CORRECT 11.Why did you postpone the class?>> CORRECT 12.My notebook in Seoul wasn\'t working and I couldn\'t see the text book.>> My notebook didn\'t work when I arrived in Seoul so I couldn\'t open the text book. 13.So I couldn\'t take the class.>> CORRECT 14.How do you feel after moving on?>> How did you feel after moving in? 15.I\'m still afraid and nervous. But I\'ll get better.>> CORRECT OR >> I\'m still afraid and a bit nervous but I\'ll get by. 16.It\'s colder in Seoul than Daegu.>> It\'s a lot colder in Seoul than in Daegu. 17.He did never lose his sedate attitude.>> He never lost his sedate attitude. 18.I don\'t want to eat such cheesy food.>> CORRECT 19.After being scolded from me, my puppy was squating down on the sofa. >> After being scolded by me, my puppy squat down on the sofa.