Could tell me about your memorable graduation experience?
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1. Could tell me about your memorable graduation experience?
I am sorry about my memorable graduation experience. It is a long time ago that I had graduated. but I remember that my family
congratulated me for my graduation.
2. What did you do after graduating from university?
I had been working at bank after graduating from university.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Hyuji.
1. Could tell me about your memorable graduation experience?
I am sorry about my memorable graduation experience.
>>> I feel sorry about my memorable graduation experience.
It is a long time ago that I had graduated, but I remember that my family congratulated me for my graduation.
>>> correct
2. What did you do after graduating from university?
I had been working at bank after graduating from university.
I had been working at bank after graduating from university.
>>> I had been working at a bank after graduating from university.
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