Could there be another world war in the future? How can we prevent a world war from happening?
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I think if another world war will be happened, we will die.
>> I think if another world war is to happen, we will all die.
That mean is that the most people in the world will disappear and the others will live hardly.
>> Most people in the world will disappear and those who survived will be having a difficult life.
Because we already have terrible and powerful weapon and then if world war will be happened in the future, we will use every weapon for winning.
>> We already have terrible and powerful weapons and if a world war is to happen in the future, we will use every weapon to win.
Therefore I think we always communicate each other for releasing the conflict.
>> Therefore, I think we should always communicate with one another to resolve conflicts.
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