could you ~
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강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. could you tell about your work experience ?
>> Could you tell me about your work experience?
>> or: Do you mind telling me your work experience?
2. I kindly ask you to receive the order and confirm for me?
>> Do you mind receiving the order and confirming for me?
>> or: Kindly ask him to receive the order and confirm for me.
3. I am not yet decided my holiday place, however i am going to somewhere close to the beach .
>> I haven\'t decided yet where to go for my holiday, however I\'m going somewhere close to the beach.
4. I just kept looking for the house and i finally found a beautiful house.
>> I just kept looking for a house, and I finally found a beautiful one.
5. He gave me glass of Gin Tonic and i put some lemon in the glass.
>> He gave me a glass of gin and tonic, and I put some lemon in it.
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