Could you check it?
학생이 쓴 원문
To be continued,
Since then, we have been serving as president. We have 10 affiliated members in Asia and participated in European Forum two times as an expert panel. Our company would like to learn more Europe’s good practice, especially France. We hope your policy and operation experiences will be delivered to us as a role model. We had MOU with SUVA, DGUV, AUVA, UWV, etc. If your company is permitted, could CNAMTS sign a MOU with COMWEL during visit? Our delegation headed by COMWEL President will attend it at that time.
I look forward to hearing good news from you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Miss [이름], thanks for trusting me to correct this very important letter of yours. I hope it will be successful! :)
Since then, we have been serving as president.
>>CORRECT
We have 10 affiliated members in Asia and participated in European Forum two times as an expert panel.
>>CORRECT
Our company would like to learn more Europe’s good practice, especially France.
>> Our company would like to learn more about Europe\'s good practice, especially in France.
We hope your policy and operation experiences will be delivered to us as a role model.
>> We hope your policy and operation experiences will serve as a role model to us.
We had MOU with SUVA, DGUV, AUVA, UWV, etc. If your company is permitted, could CNAMTS sign a MOU with COMWEL during visit?
>>We had MOU with SUVA, DGUV, AUVA, UWV, etc. If your company permits, could CNAMTS sign a MOU with COMWEL during the visit?
Our delegation headed by COMWEL President will attend it at that time.
>>Our delegation is headed by COMWEL President and he will attend it at that time.
I look forward to hearing good news from you.
>>I\'m looking forward to hear good news from you.
Since then, we have been serving as president.
>>CORRECT
We have 10 affiliated members in Asia and participated in European Forum two times as an expert panel.
>>CORRECT
Our company would like to learn more Europe’s good practice, especially France.
>> Our company would like to learn more about Europe\'s good practice, especially in France.
We hope your policy and operation experiences will be delivered to us as a role model.
>> We hope your policy and operation experiences will serve as a role model to us.
We had MOU with SUVA, DGUV, AUVA, UWV, etc. If your company is permitted, could CNAMTS sign a MOU with COMWEL during visit?
>>We had MOU with SUVA, DGUV, AUVA, UWV, etc. If your company permits, could CNAMTS sign a MOU with COMWEL during the visit?
Our delegation headed by COMWEL President will attend it at that time.
>>Our delegation is headed by COMWEL President and he will attend it at that time.
I look forward to hearing good news from you.
>>I\'m looking forward to hear good news from you.
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