Could you check it please?
학생이 쓴 원문
This project will be initiated as KANI supports the equipment and COMWEL provides the consulting about WCI and Medical service system of Korea. For more details, please see the attachment.
Of course, it should begin with prior agreement with BPJS. It would be appreciated if you inform me of your organization response. One more thing to be noticed is that KANI’s international budget should be used this year and due to the time limit, the project should start as soon as possible.
If BPJS is interested in the proposal, our delegations visit your institution at the beginning of September and discuss with the goals of project and detailed plans. Please let us know your opinion.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
강사 첨삭
This project will be initiated as KANI supports the equipment and COMWEL
provides the consulting about WCI and Medical service system of Korea.
>>CORRECT
For more details, please see the attachment.
>>CORRECT
Of course, it should begin with prior agreement with BPJS.
>>Of course, it should begin with the prior agreement with BPJS.
It would be appreciated if you inform me of your organization response.
>>It would be appreciated if you inform me of your organization\'s response.
One more thing to be noticed is that KANI’s international budget should be used this year and due to the time limit, the project should start as soon as possible.
>>CORRECT
If BPJS is interested in the proposal, our delegations visit your institution at the beginning of September and discuss with the goals of project and detailed plans.
>>If BPJS is interested in the proposal, our delegation will visit your institution at the beginning of September and discuss the goals of the project and the detailed plans.
Please let us know your opinion.
>>CORRECT
I look forward to seeing you soon.
>>I\'m looking forward to see you soon.
>>CORRECT
For more details, please see the attachment.
>>CORRECT
Of course, it should begin with prior agreement with BPJS.
>>Of course, it should begin with the prior agreement with BPJS.
It would be appreciated if you inform me of your organization response.
>>It would be appreciated if you inform me of your organization\'s response.
One more thing to be noticed is that KANI’s international budget should be used this year and due to the time limit, the project should start as soon as possible.
>>CORRECT
If BPJS is interested in the proposal, our delegations visit your institution at the beginning of September and discuss with the goals of project and detailed plans.
>>If BPJS is interested in the proposal, our delegation will visit your institution at the beginning of September and discuss the goals of the project and the detailed plans.
Please let us know your opinion.
>>CORRECT
I look forward to seeing you soon.
>>I\'m looking forward to see you soon.
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