Could you check the sentences below.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thank you for doing your homework! I am impressed with your work because you were able to answer the questions very well.
In addition to that, they were spot on correct, we just need to work a little more on your sentence structures and tenses and I\'m sure you\'d be even better
than before! :)
Once again, thank you for sending this in. A job well done!
I look forward to our next class. See you then!
~T.Maria~
Good morning Maria,
Could you check the sentences below.
>> Correct! [?]
1)Would you consider using a packing service when moving to a new place?
I prefer using a packing service because I don\'t want my furniture to get scratch and damaged physically.
>> I prefer using a packing service because I don\'t want my furniture to get any scratches and physical damage.
Moreover, It saved my time and energy.
>> Correct!
Although there are many benefit things to move by myself such as saving money, taking good more care of items.
>> Although there are many benefits if I choose to move these things by myself, such as saving money and taking good care of the items.
But, I mcuh consider the my time and energy when I use a packing service.
>> But I would rather consider the time and energy spent when I use a packing service.
2)How many times have you moved to a new place to live in your lifetime?
I have moved to a new house at least 4 times.
>> Correct! Or you also try saying, I have moved at least four times.
I left my hometown at 20 years old for entering an university and I lived in China and Canada.
>> I left my hometown when I was 20 years old, when I entered university, and I have also lived in China and Canada.
Because I like to challenge myself to get a new experience.
>> Correct! Or you can also try saying, Because I like the challenge of getting new experiences.
3)Where do you find informatinon on renting or buying houeses?
>>correct [information; houses]
I usually find information on the web when I renting or buying houses because it is easy to find a good deal.
>> I usually find information on the web when I consider renting or buying houses because it is easier to find a good deal by surfing the internet.
Thanks for your time to check them.
>> Thanks for your time in checking them.
See you later.
[이름],
>> Correct!^^
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