Could you consider living in an retirement home when you are older?
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Dear T. Melody,
I think your voice is good to hear to me, whenever it goes to lesson,
Regarding your horework \"above question\", it is positive to me. Several years ago, I had a talking about it with my wife. She also same opinion with me.
When it is getting older, I don\'t like to make a food and clean room, washing dishes and so on.
If we live an retirement home, it will be a good solution to live in without above homework.
I think, I have a friends more with same age or similar mind. So It will be a good point to live in my old time.
T. Melody, what do you think about my opinion?
Thanks.
강사 첨삭
1. Regarding your horework \"above question\", it is positive to me.
>>Regarding your homework above, I agree with it.
2. Several years ago, I had a talking about it with my wife.
>>Several years ago, I talked about it with my wife.
3. She also same opinion with me.
>>She has also the same opinion with me.
4. When it is getting older, I don\'t like to make a food and clean room, washing dishes and so on.
>>When I become older, I don\'t like to cook food,clean the room, wash the dishes and so on.
5. If we live an retirement home, it will be a good solution to live in without above homework.
>>If we live in a retirement home, it will be a good solution to where we\'re going to stay during our old age.
6. I think, I have a friends more with same age or similar mind.
>>I think I have friends with the same age who think the same as me regarding this matter.
7. So It will be a good point to live in my old time.
>> So, it will be a good point to live here in my old age.
Thank you for your good comment.
I think your opinion is good.
- T. Melody ^^
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