Could you correct my writings?

1.I have bittersweet thoughts. 2.There are so many interesting thins to enjoy such as musical,club and others. 3.And besides there are so many opportunities to learn new one. 4.The typhoon wasn't heavy that it was expected. 5.The wind blew strongly. 6.I had a rash over my whole legs. 7.I took a medicine and then I was dopey all day. 8.I went to sleep as soon as I came home after work. 9.I tend to spend much time having a meal with my family. 10.Hyun-Bin and Seven are the kindred people. 11.I want to buy this bag. But I know it's the champagne taste on a beer budget. 12.We can find out this restaurants easily. 13.The disadvantage of fast food is that it isn't good for our health. 14.The meat of patty is poor quality and it has a lot of calories. 15.In addition, its calory is very high. 16.We are easy to get weight if we eat fast food too often. 17.But it is so delicious. So I cannot help eating fast food. 18.My co-workers and I had a leisurely time eating some snacks.

Hello Ms. [이름]! I checked your sentences here. Please review my corrections below. I also suggested other ways on how you can rephrase your sentences.  Good luck~  CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.I have bittersweet thoughts. >> CORRECT OR >> I\'m feeling bittersweet.2.There are so many interesting thins to enjoy such as musical,club and others. >> There are a variety of interesting things to enjoy such as musicals, clubs, etc.  - better ^^3.And besides there are so many opportunities to learn new one. >> Besides, there are so many opportunities to learn something new.4.The typhoon wasn\'t heavy that it was expected. >> The typhoon wasn\'t as strong as we expected.5.The wind blew strongly. >> CORRECT OR >> The wind was strong.6.I had a rash over my whole legs. >> I had a rash all over my legs.7.I took a medicine and then I was dopey all day. >> I took a medicine and I felt drowsy all day.8.I went to sleep as soon as I came home after work. >> CORRECT *Excellent sentence! ^^9.I tend to spend much time having a meal with my family. >> I tend to spend more time having meals with my family.10.Hyun-Bin and Seven are the kindred people. >> Hyunbin and Seven are kindred people. *I\'m not sure what you mean by this. ^^;; 11.I want to buy this bag. But I know it\'s the champagne taste on a beer budget. >> CORRECT Or >> I know it\'s a champagne taste on a beer budget. ~ better12.We can find out this restaurants easily. >> We can find these restaurants easily.13.The disadvantage of fast food is that it isn\'t good for our health. >> CORRECT14.The meat of patty is poor quality and it has a lot of calories. >> The burger patty\'s quality is poor and it has a lot of calories.15.In addition, its calory is very high. >> In addition to that, the calorie is very high. *Check the spelling. ^^ 16.We are easy to get weight if we eat fast food too often.>> We will gain weight easily if we eat fast food too often. 17.But it is so delicious. So I cannot help eating fast food.>> CORRECT *I agree! ^^ I feel the same way.   18.My co-workers and I had a leisurely time eating some snacks. >> My co-workers and I had a fun time eating snacks. OR >> My co-workers and I ate some snacks leisurely.