Could you correct my writings?

1.I'm gonna celebrate my friend's birthday tonight. 2.We are supposed to go to Outback. 3.When I was younger, my dream was to become a doctor. 4.I had fantasies about a gown of a docter. 5.But I was afraid that a docter treats with someone's life. 6.So I wanted to become a dentist who doesn't treat with life relatively. 7.I seem to have thought that I'm too old to look for a new way. 8.Now I know it's wrong. 9.So I'm trying to find out my dream that I walk to ahead. 10.It seems to rain today.It seems like rain soon. 11.Please talk to me slowly. 12.I'm poor at listening Enlish, so I often miss your talk. 13.I'm sorry but, I told that if Marie can't give me lessons I wouldn't take lessons. 14.Because it takes time to introduce myself again. 15.There is the only one who has been thinking about my faults of the past.Yeah, it's me. 16.Ther is the only one who has remembered about that.

Hello Ms. [이름]! Here are some more corrections with your sentences. Please review them. I\'m sorry if you missed one class when I was absent last time. I know how important this is for you. I\'ll try my best not to be absent anymore. Enjoy your day! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.I\'m gonna celebrate my friend\'s birthday tonight. >> CORRECT2.We are supposed to go to Outback. >> CORRECT OR >> We are going to the Outback restaurant.3.When I was younger, my dream was to become a doctor. >> CORRECT4.I had fantasies about a gown of a docter. >> I had fantasies about wearing a doctor\'s gown.5.But I was afraid that a docter treats with someone\'s life. >> But I was afraid because a doctor needs to treat someone. OR >> I was afraid because a doctor needs to treat someone\'s life with care.6.So I wanted to become a dentist who doesn\'t treat with life relatively. >> So I wanted to become a dentist who doesn\'t need to be treat people\'s disease or ilness.7.I seem to have thought that I\'m too old to look for a new way. >> CORRECT OR >> I seem to think that I\'m too old to try something new.8.Now I know it\'s wrong. >> CORRECT9.So I\'m trying to find out my dream that I walk to ahead. >> So I\'m trying to find out what my dream is by walking forward.10.It seems to rain today.It seems like rain soon. >> It seems like it will rain today. OR >> It seems like it will rain soon.11.Please talk to me slowly. >> CORRECT12.I\'m poor at listening Enlish, so I often miss your talk. >> I\'m poor at listening so I often miss what you say. OR >> I have poor listening skills so I often miss what you say.13.I\'m sorry but, I told that if Marie can\'t give me lessons I wouldn\'t take lessons. >> CORRECT OR >> I\'m sorry but I said that if Marie can\'t teach me, then I wouldn\'t take lessons.14.Because it takes time to introduce myself again. >> CORRECT **Great sentence! ^^15.There is the only one who has been thinking about my faults of the past.Yeah, it\'s me. >> There is only one person who has been thinking about the faults of the past. Yes, it\'s me. OR >> Only one person thinks about past faults. Yes, that\'s me.16.Ther is the only one who has remembered about that. >> There is only one person who remembered that. OR >> Only one person remembered that.