Could you correct to english composition

2010-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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I'm sorry I've missed the phone call yesterday!! I overslept at 12 a.m. Because I had partide till at night. so, I'm sorry. Next time I'll give notice a day beforehand. I'm full of energy! Although, it's rannig. My mind is warm sping sunshine. I was manic for a month.. Because, was my project. Personally it was important work. My everthing was attention to project. Anyway, the project finished in great success and I need to take a some break.

강사 첨삭

Jina, It’s OK. I understand that kind of situation sometimes happens. ^^I am so glad to see one of your compositions in here. I checked some sentences but some are already correct. I noticed that you tried to separate some sentences into different phrases. You should make sure that the sentences are complete and gives a thought. You can do better. Keep it up! ^^ XOXO,Jenny   I'm sorry I've missed the phone call yesterday!! >>Correct.I overslept at 12 a.m. >>I overslept until 12nn >> I overslept until noon.Because I had partide till at night. >> It’s because I partied the night before that. So, I'm sorry. >>Correct.Next time I'll give notice a day beforehand. >> Next time, I’ll give a notice beforehand.I'm full of energy! >>Correct.Although, it's rannig. My mind is warm sping sunshine.>>Although it’s raining, my mind is warm like the spring sunshine.I was manic for a month.. >>Correct.Because, was my project. >>It was because of my project.Personally it was important work. >>It was a very important work.My everthing was attention to project. >>I focused all my attention to the project.Anyway, the project finished in great success >> Anyway, I was able to successfully finish the project.and I need to take a some break. >>And now, I need to take some break.

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