could you give me some tips?
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Lei. it's me again. ^ ^ i want to inquire someting of you. it is about music. do you like listening to music? actually in pop songs. i told you about my study plan. for it. i have to listen to music 20 minutes every day. but i don't know well in pop songs. could you give me a list of your favorite songs. if you don't have any list of your favorite song, it's okay. i want to learn easy and not fast song. please don't have any burden on your mind.
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Lei. it's me again. ^ ^
>>correct
i want to inquire someting of you.
>>I want to inquire about comething?
>>I want to ask you something.
it is about music.
>>correct
do you like listening to music?
>>correct
actually in pop songs.
>>specially pop songs?
i told you about my study plan.
>>correct
for it. i have to listen to music 20 minutes every day.
>>because of it, I need to listen to music 20 minutes per day
but i don't know well in pop songs.
>>but I don't know a lot of pop songs
could you give me a list of your favorite songs?
>>correct
if you don't have any list of your favorite song, it's okay.
>>if you don't have a list, it's okay
i want to learn easy and not fast song.
>>I want to learn songs that are not so fast and are easy to understand
please don't have any burden on your mind.
>>please don't burden yourself
Hi [이름]!
Here are some songs that I could recommend. As you have said you want to know mellow songs and are easy to understand. Here are some of the songs that I like. Hope you'll like them too.
> Halo ?Beyonce
> Hero ?Mariah Carey
> Breakaway ?Kelly Clarkson
> Heartbreak Warfare ?John Mayer
> I'm Yours ?Jason Mrarz
> Always be my Baby ?David Cook/Mariah Carey
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