could you give me some tips?

2010-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Lei. it's me again. ^ ^ i want to inquire someting of you. it is about music. do you like listening to music? actually in pop songs. i told you about my study plan. for it. i have to listen to music 20 minutes every day. but i don't know well in pop songs. could you give me a list of your favorite songs. if you don't have any list of your favorite song, it's okay. i want to learn easy and not fast song. please don't have any burden on your mind.

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Lei. it's me again. ^ ^ >>correct i want to inquire someting of you. >>I want to inquire about comething? >>I want to ask you something. it is about music. >>correct do you like listening to music? >>correct actually in pop songs. >>specially pop songs? i told you about my study plan. >>correct for it. i have to listen to music 20 minutes every day. >>because of it, I need to listen to music 20 minutes per day but i don't know well in pop songs. >>but I don't know a lot of pop songs could you give me a list of your favorite songs? >>correct if you don't have any list of your favorite song, it's okay. >>if you don't have a list, it's okay i want to learn easy and not fast song. >>I want to learn songs that are not so fast and are easy to understand please don't have any burden on your mind. >>please don't burden yourself   Hi [이름]! Here are some songs that I could recommend. As you have said you want to know mellow songs and are easy to understand. Here are some of the songs that I like. Hope you'll like them too. > Halo ?Beyonce > Hero ?Mariah Carey > Breakaway ?Kelly Clarkson > Heartbreak Warfare ?John Mayer > I'm Yours ?Jason Mrarz > Always be my Baby ?David Cook/Mariah Carey

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