Could you live without internet?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! I appreciate your answer. Internet has really been an integral part of our lives. It\'s amazing how your country has the fastest internet speed in the world. ^^
Anyway, here are some minor corrections to improve your sentences. Have a merry Christmas! ^_^
~T.Avery
I can\'t live without internet.
>> CORRECT
Internet has lots of funny things such as information, search engine, SNS, movie and misuc etc.
>> CORRECT
OR>> The internet provides information and various forms of entertainment.
Internet world is my world.
>> The internet is my world.
That is a magnificant invention.
>> That is a magnificent invention.
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