Could you live without your smartphone (or other technology item) for 24 hours?
학생이 쓴 원문
yes , i can , I really hope this , I really want other pepole don\'t call me , i want to quiet only me.
강사 첨삭
Hey Kyle! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about living without technology and I think I would agree with you to have peace and quiet just for myself.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
yes , i can
>>CORRECT
>> Yes, I can.
I really hope this
>> I really hope for this.
I really want other pepole don\'t call me
>> I really don\'t want other people to call me;
i want to quiet only me.
>>I just want silence, only for myself.
>>CORRECT
>> Yes, I can.
I really hope this
>> I really hope for this.
I really want other pepole don\'t call me
>> I really don\'t want other people to call me;
i want to quiet only me.
>>I just want silence, only for myself.
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