Could you live without your smartphone (or other technology item) for 24 hours?
학생이 쓴 원문
Smartphone is the essential item these days.
I could live without the smartphone; however, it\'s not easy because almost all the information I need is on my smartphone. For example, I don\'t remember any phone numbers.
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Smartphone is the essential item these days.
>> A smartphone is an essential item these days.
I could live without the smartphone; however, it\'s not easy because almost all the information I need is on my smartphone.
>> I could live without a smartphone; however, it\'s not easy because almost all the information I need is on my smartphone.
For example, I don\'t remember any phone numbers.
>> CORRECT
OR >>For instance, I can\'t recall any phone numbers.
>> A smartphone is an essential item these days.
I could live without the smartphone; however, it\'s not easy because almost all the information I need is on my smartphone.
>> I could live without a smartphone; however, it\'s not easy because almost all the information I need is on my smartphone.
For example, I don\'t remember any phone numbers.
>> CORRECT
OR >>For instance, I can\'t recall any phone numbers.
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