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Our Cadillac CCC manager has contacted the customer Mr. [Name] several times via telephone and email and the final outcome is as follows. Mr. [Name] will visit M&M Motor Car that is one of our Cadillac service agencies in south Seoul this Thursday or Friday at his convenient time to have his vehicle thoroughly diagnosed and repaired. The reason for servicing the Corvette at the Cadillac service center is that we have been offering him services from the beginning when he brought his vehicle into Korea in 2010 before GMK launched Corvette in Korea. Of the problems he raised, there are some items that are disputable whether or not they should be covered under warranty like engine tapping noise, hazy headlamps, and a request for warranty extension, so our CCC manager will meet and talk with him in person this Thursday or Friday when he visits the service center to resolve the issues. to be continued..

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Our Cadillac CCC manager has contacted the customer Mr. [Name] several times via telephone and email and the final outcome is as follows.

>>Correct!

OR >> Our Cadillac CCC manager has contacted the customer, Mr. [Name], several times via telephone and email and the final outcome is as follows:

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Mr. [Name] will visit M&M Motor Car that is one of our Cadillac service agencies in south Seoul this Thursday or Friday at his convenient time to have his vehicle thoroughly diagnosed and repaired.

>>Correct!

The reason for servicing the Corvette at the Cadillac service center is that we have been offering him services from the beginning when he brought his vehicle into Korea in 2010 before GMK launched Corvette in Korea.

>>Correct!

Of the problems he raised, there are some items that are disputable whether or not they should be covered under warranty like engine tapping noise, hazy headlamps, and a request for warranty extension, so our CCC manager will meet and talk with him in person this Thursday or Friday when he visits the service center to resolve the issues.

>>Correct!
to be continued..

>>Correct!

OR >> To be continued... [ellipses^^]