Could you share what your study routine is?

2023-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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I go to the studying room at 9 o\'clock every day except Sunday. Take out books to study on the desk and put an ice americano made with a coffee machine in a my tumbler. Ice americano is important. As I don\'t lile sweet coffee, it\'s the coffee I can drink, and it prevents sleepiness. I usually study English and my major computer. I am studying English hard because I have a maginot line score for studying TOEIC and the same thing. Now, the computer lisence exam is coming soon, so I am spending more time studying for the computer lisence exam. I go swimming at 7 p.m. because I learn swimming for exercise. After swimming, I go back to the studying room, study the rest, and go back home around 11 p.m.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Your study routine seems truly amazing. You\'re definitely making the most of your time and being incredibly productive. Thanks for completing your homework. Good night, and see you tomorrow!
~T. Jade^^
Could you share what your study routine is?
I go to the studying room at 9 o\'clock every day except Sunday.
>> I go to the study room at 9 o\'clock every day except Sunday.
Take out books to study on the desk and put an ice americano made with a coffee machine in a my tumbler.
>> Take out books to study on the desk and pour an iced Americano made with a coffee machine into my tumbler. 
Ice americano is important. 
>> An Iced Americano is important.
As I don\'t lile sweet coffee, it\'s the coffee I can drink, and it prevents sleepiness.
>> As I don\'t like sweet coffee, it\'s the kind of coffee I can drink, and it helps prevent sleepiness.
I usually study English and my major computer. 
>> I usually study both English and my major, computer science.
I am studying English hard because I have a maginot line score for studying TOEIC and the same thing.
>> I am studying English hard because I need to achieve a high score on the TOEIC, and the same applies.
Now, the computer lisence exam is coming soon, so I am spending more time studying for the computer lisence exam.
>> Now, the computer license exam is coming soon, so I am spending more time studying for the computer license exam.
I go swimming at 7 p.m. because I learn swimming for exercise.
>> Correct
>> OR: I go swimming at 7 p.m. because I am learning to swim for exercise.
After swimming, I go back to the studying room, study the rest, and go back home around 11 p.m.
>> Correct
>> OR: After swimming, I return to the study room, complete the remainder of my studies, and then head home around 11 p.m.

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