Could you tell me about your family? Write at least three things about your family.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a small family. There are four people in my family.
My dad is salaried worker, he is good player in all games
My mom is a alien (false) she is top Chef in my home .
My brother is a student in elementary school, he is good brother, he likes reading books and Lego.
I\'m a treasure in my home.
강사 첨삭
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Could you tell me about your family? Write at least three things about your family.
I have a small family.
>> OR: I don’t have a big family.
There are four people in my family.
>> OR: There are 4 members in my family: my father, my mother, my older brother, and me.
My dad is salaried worker, he is good player in all games
>> My dad is a salaried worker and he is a good player in all games.
My mom is a alien (false) she is top Chef in my home .
>> My mom is an alien (false) and she is the top Chef in my home.
My brother is a student in elementary school, he is good brother, he likes reading books and Lego.
>> My brother is a student in elementary school. He is a good brother and likes reading books and Legos.
>> OR: My brother is an elementry school student. He\'s a good brother and enjoys reading books and playing with LEGOs.
I\'m a treasure in my home.
>> OR: I’m my family’s little treasure.
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