Could you tell me about your graduation experience?

2021-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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When I was 26 years old. I graduated the university. I wasn\'t young. but I was fast among with my friends. So I attended graduation alone. I didn\'t want to attend to the graduation. but my mother want to look at the graduation. I have no choice. graduation in progress, my friends come to the my graduation, only for me. from hometown to university, that would be about 2 hour by the subway. thanks to much. today class had my question to [turn]. I say \"You turn to go over there\" I mean direction, You turn and you go there Was it grammatically wrong? but you say \"It\'s your turn to go over there.\" You mean first,second,third. Thank you

강사 첨삭

Good day to you, [이름] [이름]! It’s good to see that you are making an effort answering the homework that I am giving you. I am looking forward to see you in our class. Keep safe! :)
- Teacher Sophia

When I was 26 years old. I graduated the university. I wasn\'t young. but I was fast among with my friends.

>> When I was 26 years old, I graduated the university. I wasn\'t old that time, but I was the fastest among my friends.
So I attended graduation alone.

>> So, I attended graduation alone.
I didn\'t want to attend to the graduation. but my mother want to look at the graduation. I have no choice.

>> I didn\'t want to attend the graduation, but my mother want to see the graduation that\'s why I had no choice.
graduation in progress, my friends come to the my graduation, only for me.

>> During my graduation ceremony, my friends came for me.
from hometown to university, that would be about 2 hour by the subway. thanks to much.

>> From my hometown to the university, that would be about 2 hours by the subway, that is why I am thankful to my friends.

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