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2012-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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In my opinion, if i have a good feeling wiht man, we should be friends, but if i have a good feeling whit woman, we should be a couple, not friends. i think it is natural emotion. I think that having a friendship whit other people means "I really like the person. I want to be close with that guy or girl." To keep the relationship with people who you like, between same sex, It is the best choice to become a friend. But, between opposit sex, it is the best choice to marry. Same sexual friends dont leave you after marrige, but opposite sexual friends leave you after marrige. How about you? Do you have a lot of boy friends?

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Dear [이름], Okay I get your point. Thank you for your opinion. I don't have a lot of boyfriends. Haha. But I have A boyfriend. But I also have a bestfriend who is a boy. We hang out togeether with no romantic attration. It is cool too sometimes having a boy as your bestfriend. He gets to be a big brother for you. Maybe it just depends on the society you grew up with to accept this kind of relationship. See you tomorrow! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: In my opinion, if i have a good feeling wiht man, we should be friends, but if i have a good feeling whit woman, we should be a couple, not friends. >>In my opinion, if I have a good feeling about that man I would try to make him my friend. If I have a good feeling about a girl then I should make her my girlfriend. i think it is natural emotion. >>I think it is a natural emotion.I think that having a friendship whit other people means \"I really like the person. I want to be close with that guy or girl.\" >>I think that being friends with other people means 'I really like that person and I want to be close to them whether it be a girl or boy.' To keep the relationship with people who you like, between same sex, It is the best choice to become a friend. >>In order to keep a good relationship with people you like between the ssame sex, it is better to become friends. But, between opposit sex, it is the best choice to marry. >>But between the opposite sex, it is better to mary that person. Same sexual friends dont leave you after marrige, but opposite sexual friends leave you after marrige. >>Friends of the same sex don't leave you after you are married but when it comes to the opposite sex, they will leave you.How about you? Do you have a lot of boy friends?

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