coupang
학생이 쓴 원문
It is impossible the Coupang recover trust of people.
There are many reasons that.
The owner doesn\'t present real solution and even apology in living in U.S. citizen.
The company does not try to compensate for victim.
Even the withdrawal process are too serious complicate, disturb people leave it.
I finish those complicate withdrawal .process and delete the Coupang app in my phone.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
TRUST, a very important word that everyone should keep and recognize. Once it\'s broken, we can never bring back the whole piece of it,
Aki~
It is impossible the Coupang recover trust of people.
>>>It is impossible the Coupang to recover the trust of people.
There are many reasons that.
>>> CORRECT!
The owner doesn\'t present real solution and even apology in living in U.S. citizen.
>>> The owner doesn\'t present a real solution or even an apology who is living as U.S. citizens.
The company does not try to compensate for victim.
>>> CORRECT!
Even the withdrawal process are too serious complicate, disturb people leave it.
>>> Even the withdrawal process is too serious and complicate, disturbing people from leaving it.
I finish those complicate withdrawal .process and delete the Coupang app in my phone.
>> I finish the complicated withdrawal process and deleted the Coupang app on my phone.
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