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I am applying for an executive assistant.

I have been working as an executive assistant of commercial business head in Citi bank Korea for 2 years and I stayed in Australia for 2 and half years to work in immigration agency and study. As an administrative assistant in Australia, I was in charge of client’s visa application processing and I facilitated the implementation in complicated case and it leaded customer’s satisfaction. Since I worked in Citi bank Korea, I have been supporting the Executive, Branch managers, RMs and communicating the Global & Regional managements. I also managed an executive’s relocation and benefits that based on Expatriate policy with English speaking Global & Regional expat coordinators. My work experience in various fields has allowed me to develop both my professional communication skill in all level of management and my great understanding of company regulation. I have a working holiday visa and I am available to work full time in Canada for 1 year from the end of September 2017 and happy to extend my carrier in Canada if I can get a chance.

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I am applying for the executive assistant position.

I have been working as an executive assistant to one of Citibank Korea\'s managers for two years now. Before my current job, I stayed in Australia for two years and six months where I worked as an executive assistant to a lawyer in an immigration agency. While working, I took some Business and English courses to further my knowledge and enhance my English communication skills. As an administrative assistant in Australia, I was in charge in processing client’s visa applications. I also facilitated the implementation of complicated cases which leads to customer’s satisfaction. Ever since I worked in Citi bank Korea, I have been supporting the Executive managers, Branch managers and Reporting Managers. I also communicate with other management from our Global & Regional offices. Furthermore, I  managed every executive’s relocation and benefit claims based on the Expatriation policies while coordinating with English speaking Global & Regional expatriate coordinators. My work experiences in various fields has allowed me to developed my professional communication skills and understanding of company regulations.

I have a working holiday visa and I am available to work full time in Canada for one year starting September 30, 2017, but given the chance, I am  happy to extend my stay in Canada where I can further my career.

*Executive assistant with 5 years of experience providing administrative support to up to 100 Korea and global team.

>>Executive assistant with 5 years experience in providing administrative support to at least 100 Korean and global teams.

*Strong working relationships with local and global bankers of all levels and in all departments within the organization

>>Strong working relationship with local and global bankers from all levels and in all departments within the organization

*Highly developed analytical, research, problem solving, organizational and time management skill

>>Highly developed analytical, research, problem solving, organizational and time management skills.

 Q. Give me an example of important goal you had to get and tell me about your progress in reaching that goal

-when I worked at a duty free store, our product sales performance was not really good compare to the other brands. So all the staffs did set a goal and get a training regarding how to were the trench coat, scarf because it is really important skill as much as customer service. After 2 months later our sales performance had been improved 30% then the staffs who reached the goal get a bonus include me. It was really outstanding performance and achievement for me and was really helpful to have high sales performance later then.

>>When I worked at a duty free store, our product sales performance was not really good compared to the other brands. In view of this, all the staffs had set a goal and got a training on how to wear a trench coat and scarf because knowing how to wear one properly is as important as knowing your duties as  a customer service representative. After two months, our sales performance had a significant 30% improvement and the staffs who reached their goals got a bonus, including me. It was really an outstanding performance and achievement for me and I managed to maintain the high sales performance from then on.