Cover of a book can be a factor of choosing book.
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- T. Beth
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I think the cover of a book is important because, it can be a factor to attract
people to read it for several reasons. >>> correct
When people decided to buy certain books, they go to the bookstore or look on
the internet book shopping-mall.
>>> When people have decided to buy certain books, they go to the bookstore or look in the internet book shopping-mall.
Let’s suppose there are exactly same 3 books but
with out the cover.
>>> Let’s suppose there are exactly three similar books but without the cover.
In this case, the cover of a book can be the important cause
so to the person who tried to buy it.
>>> In this case, the cover of a book can be the important cause for the person to buy it.
Or even if people didn’t chose the book to buy, the cover can also be the crucial
factor of selecting books.
>>> Or even if people didn’t chose the book to buy, the cover can also be the crucial factor for selecting books.
They don’t have any information about book to chose,
the cover which represents the title well and show attractive design can make
people to look at it.
>>> They don’t have any information about the book to chose, the cover which represents the title well and show attractive design can make people look at it.
>>> OR: They don’t have any information about the book to chose, the cover which represents the title well and show attractive design can attract people.
So it gives book a chance to be chosen.
>>> correct
>>> OR: So it is more likely that people would choose that book.
In another case, some fastidious people might have sufficient informations about
the book they want to buy, include the contents, authors, and translator if that
book is written by foreign writer.
>>> In another case, some fastidious people might have sufficient information about the book they want to buy, including the contents, authors, and translator if that book is written by a foreign writer.
It means there might be a dissatisfaction with
the cover, nevertheless they will buy the books.
>>> correct
But in this case, if the cover is
very strange but it re-released with beautifully renewal cover, this can give
satisfaction and happiness to them.
>>> In the case where the cover is very strange but it was re-produced with beautifully renewed cover, this can give satisfaction and happiness to them.
So by this cases, I think the cover of a book is important point of choosing book
for people.
>>> So given these cases, I think the cover of a book is an important point of choosing book for people.
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