COVID-19 and Travel
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Where do you want to travel after this virus is gone?
-I want to travel to Janpan with my mom. We love to bath in hot spring.
And I hope to travel to Maldives. I plan to travel to Maldives with my friend next Febrary. We have saved money for this trip. But because of COVID 19 infection. I am upset that I can\'t go on a trip.
2. Is it safe for your country if visitors travel to your country?
- I can\'t guarantee that my country is satisfactorily safe. A month ago, the increase in the number of COVID-19 infected people was zero.
But now infected people are increasing every day. The increase is over fifty in the number of new infected people every day.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
I want to travel to Janpan with my mom.
>>I want to travel to Japan with my mom.
We love to bath in hot spring.
>>CORRECT!
And I hope to travel to Maldives.
And I hope to travel to Maldives.
>>CORRECT!
I plan to travel to Maldives with my friend next Febrary.
>> I plan to travel to Maldives with my friend next February.
We have saved money for this trip.
>>CORRECT!
But because of COVID 19 infection.
>>CORRECT!
I am upset that I can\'t go on a trip.
>>CORRECT!
I can\'t guarantee that my country is satisfactorily safe.
I can\'t guarantee that my country is satisfactorily safe.
>>CORRECT!
A month ago, the increase in the number of COVID-19 infected people was zero.
>>CORRECT!
But now infected people are increasing every day.
But now infected people are increasing every day.
>>CORRECT!
The increase is over fifty in the number of new infected people every day.
>>CORRECT!
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