Cow

Cows give us daily product which is like milk,cheese and yoghurt. Cows fart is very smelly and are lots of gas. Cows live in barn or farm or field or farm yard. Cows cry like"mooo~". Cow is also very bad for the word because of the gas that they make when they fart. However we meed cow because we need the milk,cheese and yoghurt from cow. I wish that the cows don't make too much gas when they fart. And also they're poo smells!Ugh!

Hi there!^^ Happy Wednesday!:)   What a composition, I laughed so hard when I read it. You were basically talking about cows\' fart. Have you experiences smelling their fart? How\'d you know it smelly? Hmmm.. Anyway, thank you still for this. I\'ve made some modifications for your to review later on, okay?^___^   ~T. Mayleen~   Cows give us daily product which is like milk,cheese and yoghurt. >> Cows give us dairy products like milk, cheese, and yogurt. Cows fart is very smelly and are lots of gas.>> Caws\' fart is very smelly.Cows live in barn or farm or field or farm yard. >> Cows live in barns or farms.Cows cry like\"mooo~\". >> Cows say \'Mooo!\'.Cow is also very bad for the word because of the gas that they make when they fart. >> Cows produce gas when they fart.However we meed cow because we need the milk,cheese and yoghurt from cow. >> However, we need cows because they give us milk, cheese, and yogurt.I wish that the cows don\'t make too much gas when they fart. >> I wish won\'t release too much gas when they fart.And also they\'re poo smells!Ugh! >> Also, their poo(manure) really smell bad.