Cramming#1 haha!

Hello [이름] [이름]!

You really love cramming! Hahahaha...but let me say if this was a product of cramming, then I want to see your works if you weren\'t because this composition was really good and well though-of. It reminded me of an essay lol. Please note that the corrections were very minimal so good job and keep it up! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

1. I want you to know the world\'s first programmer\'s name. Her name is \'Ada Lovelace\'.

>>CORRECT!
2. In the 19century, It was not common that women are entering to University.

>>In the 19th century, it wasn\'t common for women to enter universities.
3. But she entered the university and studied analytical engine which is the basic form of computer.

>>CORRECT!
4. She researched the way to work this machine productively, so It became the first algorithm that exists in the world.

>>CORRECT!
5. By using an algorithm, she created the programming grammars that are still widely used these days. It is \'SUBROUTINE\', \'LOOP\' ,\'IF\'.

>>By using an algorithm, she created the programming grammars that are still widely used these days. they are \'SUBROUTINE\', \'LOOP\' ,\'IF\'.
6. For those examples, the grammar \'IF\' is really important. Because It became the milestone of the Artificial intelligent.

>>For those examples, the grammar \'IF\' is really important because It became the milestone of Artificial intelligence.
7. Her researches are also used in a lot of industries including aerospace electronics, military defection and air traffic control.

>>CORRECT!
8. Compared to her works, there are no many people who know her name.

>>Compared to her works, there are not many people who know her name.
9. I heard this sentence before which was\"Women\'s success is minimizing and hidden\". We have to find out more women in hidden history and rewrite and create our own herstory.

>>I heard this sentence before which was \"Women\'s success is minimized and hidden\". We have to find out more women in hidden history and rewrite and create our own \"her\" story.