cramming#2 !!

Hi [이름] [이름]!

Wow! that was some cramming you did hahaha. But despite the hurry, you still wrote your composition nicely! I was laughing while reading the whole thing. Gosh, you\'re so hilarious. Now I\'m looking forward even more to seeing you in class today! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

1. As I mentioned to you, my weekends are packed with a bakery routine.

>>As I mentioned to you, my weekends are packed with activities that make up my routine in the bakery.

2. So I\'d like to share my semi-common episode usually happen in my semester.

>>So I\'d like to share my semi-common episode that usually happens in my semester.

3. As the title of this essay, this episode usually happens when I\'m cramming in my exam season especially on Saturday.

>>As the title of this essay, this episode usually happens when I\'m cramming for my exam season especially on Saturday.
4. After I finished the work, I head to my school and stay up all night in the library for major studies.

>>CORRECT!

5. Because I don\'t study steadily in weekdays so I go to school weekend with full of guilt and regret.

>>Because I don\'t study regularly on weekdays, I go to school on weekends  full of guilt and regret.
6.To lessen my guilt, regret and pain, I usually study with BEER. Alcohol is not allowed in library but I have a strategy to get it in.

>>CORRECT! (HAHAHA)
7. All I have to need is tumblr and one can of beer. I pretend beer as tea so It was a perfect crime!

>>All I need is a tumbler and one can of beer. I pretend that the beer was tea so it was a perfect crime!
8. I usually studied with beer and saw the sun-rise on the 3rd floor of the library. Usually at that time of sunrise, I\'m insane.

>>I usually studied with beer and saw the sunrise from the 3rd floor of the library. Usually by sunrise, I\'ve already gone insane.
9. After that, I came back home and slept 5-6 hours and go to a part-time job.

>>After that, I came back home and slept for 5-6 hours and then went  to a part-time job.
10. I always felt pain which is the result of my lazy perfectionist temper, but a human can\'t fixable.

>>I always felt pain which is the result of my lazy, perfectionist attitude but a human aren\'t fixable