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학생이 쓴 원문
1. Embrace
-->We have to accept the fact that our bodies get weaker with aging.
2. Irrelevant
-->It is irrelevant with me. I didn\'t steal it!
3. Neglected
-->There is a neglected house. I heard a story that a ghost comes out from that house.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] U!
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. Great job!
Have a great weekend! See you next week!
Have a great weekend! See you next week!
-T.Jhozel
1. Embrace
-->We have to accept the fact that our bodies get weaker with aging.
>> Correct!
OR >> We must embrace the fact that our bodies deteriorate with age.
OR >> We must embrace the fact that our bodies deteriorate with age.
2. Irrelevant
-->It is irrelevant with me. I didn\'t steal it!
>> It is irrelevant to me. I didn\'t steal it!
3. Neglected
-->There is a neglected house. I heard a story that a ghost comes out from that house.
OR >> There is a house that has been abandoned. I have heard a story that a ghost appeared in that house.
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