Creative Writing 3

Hi, Lily!

Another job well done with your homework.

You just need to be careful with puntuations and capitalization.

I like how you compose your answer.

Have a nice day!

_Teacher Dianne

Q.A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? 

>> correct
 A. I live in Suwon, Korea. I think He will like Suwon. First of all, the traffic is very convenient.

>> I live in Suwon, Korea. I think he will like Suwon. First of all, the traffic is very convenient. (Grammatically correct. \"he\")

Our city has subways, buses, and trains. Especially, there are many delicious things in our city. Among them, chicken and ribs are famous. It was introduced in recent movies(극한직업) and become more famous. 

>> Our city has subways, buses, and trains. Especially, there are many delicious things in our city. Among them are chicken and ribs, which are famous. It was introduced in a recent movie, \"An Extreme Job\" (극한직업) and it became more famous.  
 And There is Suwon Hwaseong Fortress in our city. It is designated as UNESCO. It is very beautiful and good for a walk. Many people come to see it. Maybe he also like this. 

>>  And there is Suwon Hwaseong Fortress in our city. It is designated as a UNESCO world heritage site. It is a very beautiful place and it\'s good for taking a walk. Many people come to see it. Maybe he will also like this. 
 But I think he hates one thing. There are many crows in our city in winter. Birds poop every night. I also hete this.
I think everything in Suwon is perfect except that.

>>  But I think he hates one thing. There are many crows in our city in winter. Birds poop every night. I also hate this.
I think everything in Suwon is perfect except that. (Grammatically correct. Just be careful with the spelling. \"hate\")