CREATIVE WRITING!?

Refresh wind and wide valley there are nobody around...
>> Refreshing wind and wide valleys... There are nobody around...

>> OR: Refreshing wind and wide valleys... There are no one around...

2. REFRESH should be REFRESHING since this word is used to describe WIND.

3. It is better to separate REFRESHING WIND AND WIDE VALLEYS from THERE ARE NOBODY AROUND.
The stagnant water is about 10ft in deep... Its nice to swim...
>> The stagnant water is about 10 feet deep ... It\'s nice to swim...

>> OR: The stagnant water is about 10 feet deep ... It is nice to swim...

4. 10 FT IN DEEP should be 10 FT DEEP only.

5. It is better to avoid shortcuts in writing measurements.

^.^ Thank you for using the word STAGNANT on your homework! Very good! ^.^
and float of water is flittering by sun ...
>> And, floating water is glittering by the sun...

>> OR: In addition, floating water is glittering by the sun...

>> OR: And, splashes of water are glittering by the sun...

6. Even if a writing is a poem, make sure that the first letter of a stanza is capitalized or in uppercase form.
Fishes are following me.

>> CORRECT!

I guess they\'ve never seen like this big animal.
>> I guess they\'ve never seen a big animal like this.

7. Be careful with the locations of words in your sentences.
They are looking with amazed eyes.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: They are looking at me with their amazed eyes.

>> OR: They are looking at me with amusement.

After swimming I keep in warm nearby fire.
>> After swimming, I keep myself warm nearby fire.

8. IN should be MYSELF.
I barbecue fishes.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I grill fishes.

fishes are big.

>> The fishes are big.

9. Remember to capitalize the first letter of the first word in your sentence.

10. There should be THE before FISHES, because they are the same fishes you mentioned in I BARBECUE FISHES.

I full up and take a nap.
>> I am full up and take a nap.

11. FULL UP is an adjective, so there should be AM before it, since the subject in your sentence is I.
The sun is out.

>> CORRECT!

I see incredible meteor shower by chance.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s really thanksful day.

>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: I\'m really thankful today.

>> OR: It\'s really a wonderful day that is worthy to be thankful for in life.

I hope not to be forgotten this scene.
>> IT\'S BETTER TO SAY: I hope I will not forget this scene.
I find its hard to write Im bit dizzy @.,@
>> I find it hard to write. I\'m a bit dizzy. @.,@

12. Be careful with when you should use ITS and IT\'S. They are totally different.

13. There should be a dots (.) after WRITE and DIZZY.

14. IM should be I\'M.

see ya, paula.

>> See you, Paula.

>>  OR: See you, Paula!

15. Don\'t forget capitalization.