creative writing
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Lily! ^^,)
It\'s a brand new week. Thank you for answering your homework.
What\'s you favorite month? We can talk about your answer in class.
See you then.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I think hot, greenish and tired describe the August best.
>>> I think hot, greenish, and tiresome describe August the best.
The first reason why hot comes to mind is because August is very hot because it belongs to summer.
>>> First, the reason why hot comes to mind is because August is a very hot month because of summer.
Second, in August, greenish came to mind because it is usually full of green-colored plants.
>>> Second, greenish comes to mind because it is usually full of green-colored plants in August.
Finally, the reason why I chose Tired is because August is very hot and my body is tired.
>>> Finally, the reason why I choose tiresome is because August is very hot and my body gets tired easily.
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