Credit Card Use
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Credit card use is very common in our society.
It shows that card use is very useful and comfortable.
With one card, we will be able to buy and eat everything we want.
However, cards may also have many downsides instead of convenience.
If we use it without restraint, we will eventually end up in a bad credit.
I have three credit cards.
I\'m always surprised when my card-use statement arrives at me by email.
At that time I tell myself, \"How much I used!\"
I think that if we use the card reasonably and appropriately, the advantages will increase and the disadvantages will decrease.
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I\'m quite grateful for that.
The improvement would just continue.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Credit card use is very common in our society.
>> Correct
It shows that card use is very useful and comfortable.
It shows that card use is very useful and comfortable.
>> Correct
With one card, we will be able to buy and eat everything we want.
With one card, we will be able to buy and eat everything we want.
>> Correct
However, cards may also have many downsides instead of convenience.
However, cards may also have many downsides instead of convenience.
>> However, cards may also have many downsides in addition to its convenience.
If we use it without restraint, we will eventually end up in a bad credit.
If we use it without restraint, we will eventually end up in a bad credit.
>> If we use it without restraint, we will eventually end up with bad credit.
I have three credit cards.
I have three credit cards.
>> Correct
I\'m always surprised when my card-use statement arrives at me by email.
I\'m always surprised when my card-use statement arrives at me by email.
>> I\'m always surprised when my card use statement arrives by email.
At that time I tell myself, \"How much I used!\"
At that time I tell myself, \"How much I used!\"
>> At that time, I always tell myself, \"I spent too much!\"
I think that if we use the card reasonably and appropriately, the advantages will increase and the disadvantages will decrease.
I think that if we use the card reasonably and appropriately, the advantages will increase and the disadvantages will decrease.
>> Correct
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