credit card vs. cash

2014-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The most expensive thing that I purchased with my credit card is TV set. In my everyday life, I often use credit cards rather than carrying cash with me. It goes without saying that it is much convenient to use a credit card and you can buy any goods or services even when you don’t have money. However, I sometimes think of disposing all my credit cards because I tend to over spend due to the credit cards. When using a credit card, I do not feel that I’m using real money. Paying with cash can avoid impulse shopping because if we have neither cash nor a credit card, virtually there is no way we can buy anything. Even when I pay the same amount of money, I feel different when paying with cash and with a credit card. I paid easily by a credit card. I might have not purchased a thing if I have had to pay cash. When paying with cash,I feel, touch, and see real money, and it makes me be careful. But, the plastic money does not seem like real spending to me.

강사 첨삭







Hello there! Happy Monday morning!

So how was your weekend? I had a wonderful one.

Anyway, you did a great job in expressing your thoughts! 

Please check the corrections I have made and let me know if there are differences in terms of the corrections and the thoughts you want to express.

Have a wonderful day! ^^

~T. Nina~


The most expensive thing that I purchased with my credit card is TV set.

>>T he most expensive thing that I purchased with my credit card was my TV set.

In my everyday life, I often use credit cards rather than carrying cash with me.

>> CORRECT

OR >> I often use credit cards everyday, rather than cash.

It goes without saying that it is much convenient to use a credit card and you can buy any goods or services even when you don’t have money.

>> It goes without saying that using a credit card is much convenient because you can buy any goods or avail of any services even when you don\'t have money. 

However, I sometimes think of disposing all my credit cards because I tend to over spend due to the credit cards.

>> CORRECT

OR >> However, because I tend to overspend due to it (referring to the credit card), I sometimes think of disposing it.

When using a credit card, I do not feel that I’m using real money.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Although, when I\'m using a credit card, I do not feel like I\'m using real money.

Paying with cash can avoid impulse shopping because if we have neither cash nor a credit card, virtually there is no way we can buy anything.

>> Paying with cash can avoid impulse shopping, because, if we have neither cash nor a credit card, virtually, there is no way we can buy anything.

Even when I pay the same amount of money, I feel different when paying with cash and with a credit card.

>> CORRECT

I paid easily by a credit card.

>> I pay easily with a credit card.

I might have not purchased a thing if I have had to pay cash.

>> I might not purchase a thing if I have to pay cash.

When paying with cash,I feel, touch, and see real money, and it makes me be careful.

>> When paying with cash, I feel, touch and see real money, and it makes me to be careful handling it.

OR >> Paying with cash makes me more careful in handling it because I feel, touch and see real money.

But, the plastic money does not seem like real spending to me.

>> CORRECT

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