credit card vs. cash
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The most expensive thing that I purchased with my credit card is TV set.
>>T he most expensive thing that I purchased with my credit card was my TV set.
In my everyday life, I often use credit cards rather than carrying cash with me.
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OR >> I often use credit cards everyday, rather than cash.
It goes without saying that it is much convenient to use a credit card and you can buy any goods or services even when you don’t have money.
>> It goes without saying that using a credit card is much convenient because you can buy any goods or avail of any services even when you don\'t have money.
However, I sometimes think of disposing all my credit cards because I tend to over spend due to the credit cards.
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OR >> However, because I tend to overspend due to it (referring to the credit card), I sometimes think of disposing it.
When using a credit card, I do not feel that I’m using real money.
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OR >> Although, when I\'m using a credit card, I do not feel like I\'m using real money.
Paying with cash can avoid impulse shopping because if we have neither cash nor a credit card, virtually there is no way we can buy anything.
>> Paying with cash can avoid impulse shopping, because, if we have neither cash nor a credit card, virtually, there is no way we can buy anything.
Even when I pay the same amount of money, I feel different when paying with cash and with a credit card.
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I paid easily by a credit card.
>> I pay easily with a credit card.
I might have not purchased a thing if I have had to pay cash.
>> I might not purchase a thing if I have to pay cash.
When paying with cash,I feel, touch, and see real money, and it makes me be careful.
>> When paying with cash, I feel, touch and see real money, and it makes me to be careful handling it.
OR >> Paying with cash makes me more careful in handling it because I feel, touch and see real money.
But, the plastic money does not seem like real spending to me.
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